Art trade

I'm going to give you a few tips on how to improve this picture because everyone needs it once in awhile I love the style you have going on in this concept, and youre kinda an eerie guy, this is probably for someone but I would love to see one similar. Perhaps if you slimmed the neck down a bit it would give it more of this morbid sense like you're trying to make it look like it belongs in a Tim Burton film. Just giving some tips!